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The Marlowe Motel Business application

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Eden Nallebjorn

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Brief Summary:

To explain our idea very simply we wish to turn the Pink Cage Motel into a functioning business with rooms available to be rented out for up to a week at a time that offer some storage and a wardrobe.

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Sal Marlowe and his family have taken ownership of Pink Cage Motel area for a while now and we have actively been working towards turning the area into a functioning business, currently we rent the motel out as 'office space' for small business owners so that people can have a room to meet clients, have group meetings, completely work out of like law firms and generally just do whatever other business they wish at an established location instead of awkwardly meeting by a gas station or somewhere less private. The motel seems to have a very negative past being controlled purely by criminal groups and generally being very abandoned and unused which we feel is a massive shame as its a great location in the city.

There is a clear issue regarding housing in the city and we feel this would be extremely beneficial to everyone both old and new if we would be able to establish an actual motel/hotel business renting out rooms on a weekly basis this means every week opens new opportunities for someone to get a place rather than the struggles a lot of people have finding proper housing due to the longer time between rent payments and houses freeing up.

Now we completely understand this is something very big to request and so we have made sure to really push and do our best to show what could be if we were given the amazing opportunity to make this idea a reality. Using the new pictures that have recently been added I created physical personal motel employee id cards for all of our employees that i feel just really improve the professionalism of a business compared to a regular /me. 

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On top of this utilizing the pictures we created room keys we give to each of our guests staying at our motel so they have a proof of purchasing and owning the room, these keycards have a QR code on them you can scan that takes you to a page outlining which rooms are available, which room you own and a small floor plan so you can understand which number is which door. Without having keys to the property we felt this was the best way we could operate, the Marlowe family have a handful of security that work to keep those renting out the motel safe and also watch out for any potential threats or robbers wishing to cause issues on the property.

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While I understand some people may be quick to jump to the conclusion we are simply in it for the money I can assure you that is not the case! I create all the graphics and advertisements and ids we use myself and its something I love doing, I love creating a great rp experience for people and I feel by giving us a chance to run this business we could open up soo many possibilities for rp on both ends of life in the city Legal & Illegal. As I said earlier on in this post the motel is a very abandoned unused area and its a massive shame as its in such a great spot in the city! I feel by having us there we are able to turn that location into a social area for people to hang around at, I've come to find way too often the most social areas are just groups and groups of people stood around gas stations unless there's an event going on at a location while we would be able to offer somewhere new and unique where people can spend their time, relax and socialise.

We have begun holding weekly events at the motel open to everyone for free and we have many more planned instead of just parties! Our first event held featured Music, free drinks and food, a private doctor for any injuries, hayes auto repairing vehicles and just a generally welcoming atmosphere for people to come and enjoy themselves that we paid for completely out of our pockets, we had an unbelievable turnout and im extremely happy with how it went! In the future were going to be looking into raffles, boxing matches, various contests ranging from races to graphics design and photography and much more!

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While I could try to preach on and on about our idea but I think its about time to stop my rambling and get into the question I'm sure a few of you are thinking while reading through this.

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Speaking to people around the city and between our own group we compiled just a few of the benefits we feel having a business of this kind could bring to the server.

-It adds more housing to the city but on a temporary basis meaning houses don't become obsolete or any less useful it just simply opens up more affordable temporary housing for players and gives them a place they can call their own for a week.

-Turns a derelict pretty abandoned location into a populated area for rp and events that ISNT a gas station

-We noticed around a year ago the suggestion for a Hotel was accepted and I think we can offer an alternative with this motel that isn't automated (interacting with your alt key) and instead is ran by players improving the rp and experience people have in the city.

-Adds a bunch of new possibilities for both legal and illegal people in regards to temporary housing and storage

-creates a whole new style of rp selling motel rooms and managing the place, we intend to run it properly and as such we have security ect and policies for the property regarding bringing weapons onto the premises ect even our security guards have protocols for how they deal with situations.

-More interesting and rp focused than just walking up to a door and buying it holding alt. Also offers more affordable temporary accomodation for those who want/need it especially newer players

-By being in a fairly central area for the city it gives us the chance to help newer players (which we actively try to do currently) by giving a proper intro to the server explaining and showing them the various directions they can go job wise and in general how they can start out rather than that person ending up straight under a gangs wing telling them to buy and sell drugs or pulling them straight into crime, a continuous dead beat cycle

-Extra housing is a huge plus, people cant find it during the middle of the month. And having a continuously monitored housing arrangement (if they don't pay, are known to be very inactive or are constantly causing issues they can be evicted) allows proper circulation for people who join for a few days then disappear and leaves room for those who are wanting to stick around on the server.

Does this suggestion change balance on the server ?

While yes I believe it changes some balancing on the server I cant see it affecting for example the demand for houses, the prices of any items drastically or at all. (If anyone does have anything they think it might affect please do bring it up as were constantly wanting to work on and improve this idea! All criticism is welcome ❤️ ) 

Thank you for taking the time to read through our suggestion! I look forward to seeing your opinions on our idea and any feedback or possible critique you may have!

-Sal Marlowe & the whole of the Marlowe Family

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i'm gonna echo the same as i did with the triads restaurant suggestion.

idea is good, alot of dev time compared to latest new shop(lang and Diaz)

idea is good, but it's not something that will come to you in a mere few months, keep doing what you're doing and who knows what might happen

 
i'm gonna echo the same as i did with the triads restaurant suggestion.

idea is good, alot of dev time compared to latest new shop(lang and Diaz)

idea is good, but it's not something that will come to you in a mere few months, keep doing what you're doing and who knows what might happen
Thanks for the feedback! This is definitely not something we expect to just be handed to us and especially not something that will just magically appear in a week or from just a few months work aha, Regardless of what happens with this suggestion we are not planning on stopping anytime soon with the motel, to me its really enjoyable and its an rp style I really love doing 🙂 While I feel our suggestion would benefit the RP we offer and the city as a whole its definitely not the defining factor and I'm hoping as we continue, the weekly events and the office spaces we offer benefit people just as much!

 
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I love this idea, I honestly would love to see something like this implemented in the future and as Nikolai said keep doing what you guys are doing and who knows what might happen!

I look forward to seeing more from this!

 
A nice small update on business

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Today we held another one of our weekly events! this was our first attempt at a boxing event and while we had some issues and disruptions I'm hoping people enjoyed it! We are constantly trying to improve aswell as expand our network. This was our first Sponsored event thanks to Kraken and we are even currently in the talks with Gruppe 6 regarding security and support for our weekly events in the future!

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We have some fun events planned from a pub quiz to parkour challenges and even Bingo! we are loving being able to provide entertainment as well as rooms for people that need them. We have welcomed two new employees to our family who will be assisting with security for the property and we are more than happy with how our business is growing 😄 As always we're going to continue to try and keep up our events every week and look forward to hopefully seeing you around whether you're after a nice room, stopping by for a chat or you're attending one of our events! 

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Thanks for taking the time to read our posts and we hope you're enjoying the motel! 

-Sal, Aaron, Silas & the whole of the motel team
 
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Business Update & Some rebranding

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Well its been an interesting little while since our last update although fairly short! We've had a wonderful time chatting with people at our motel, we also achieved a new milestone! we have now got just about half of our rooms rented out at one time which is awesome to see and we hope more people continue to use our office spaces and temporary rooms! After some discussion we decided to change our logo to make it look a little more snazzy (definitely not because people kept calling it the Magnum logo haha) A massive thanks to @Gortonon the new design!

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With so many events on for Halloween we decided we would sit back a little and just enjoy attending some of events but we are continuing to work on some new stuff coming soon from a fun little free entry quiz night to more Boxing events! In the meantime we are also happy to announce we have had a new partnership with the lovely people at Benefactor! Its always great to speak to other businesses and help each other out and we are thrilled they decided to come and speak with us regarding promoting their business 🙂 . While our income has been fairly low due to the prices we offer we prefer to keep stuff cheap as it means we can happily provide our services at the motel with the tools we have available to us without feeling like were taking too much from people for our rooms which is the last thing we want!​

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As always we're open to any feedback and advice or criticism as we try to improve ourselves as well as trying to improve peoples experiences in the city! We look forward to seeing you all around and we really appreciate the support we have been getting from people stopping by the motel 😄 We're looking forward to seeing where the future takes us!​
 
Should this not be posted on the "international arrivals" page? it's not really a suggestion is it,  nevertheless GOOD JOB !  
The suggestion is for the Motel to be turned into a functional Motel business! Looking at past business applications I saw a lot of people were showing their progress every few weeks or so or just when progress or changes have been made with the business. Also thank you! I'm glad you like our idea ❤️ 

 
Another business update!

This will we the last update we do for a while as we continue to work on improving the motel and events we hold! We've been posting a lot of updates but a lot has been going on with business haha! To start off with we want to say thank you as always to the people that come down to the motel whether its to rent out a room or just coming down for a chat!

We now have a complete employee handbook that covers procedures for the motel and any other general info about us which is something I've been working on for a while now. We're happy to say we have two new partners Ingram legal & Gruppe 6 which is awesome when it comes to events and generally keeping people safe around the motel! 

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This past week we have been working on improving the quality of our posts and posters as well as generally assisting those who work for the motel seeing what we can do to get them working on something they enjoy doing! We are also pushing something new when we are free which is assisting people new to the city, whether they just want a tour around or are curious how they can earn their first few thousand pounds we are working on guiding them and giving them a good positive start to the city!

We are working towards some really fun events in the next few weeks from a bmx event with judges held on the roof of our motel using the skatepark to even a taxi demolition derby (held in a controlled safe environment) we are really looking forward to seeing how people enjoy our events and as always we are constantly trying to improve them and the motel as a whole 🙂 ​

As always thank you for reading! we look forward to seeing you around the city or at our motel ❤️ ​

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Quiet Days

Business is still going as always! we have noticed over the past few weeks a large lack of customers at our motel with some days we spend 6 hours working at the motel with not a single person stopping by. This is not going to stop us though! I have been working on new promotions and events and as usual we are trying to make sure the motel is up and running for at least 3-4 hours a day!

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A new snazzy tweedle promotion video​

We are continuing to look into how we can improve the motel even looking into the use of the new portable storage containers for rooms although they would prove quite difficult to keep secure with them not being able to be locked. We're hoping to continue to provide office spaces and rooms for people at the motel and hope in these next few weeks our events help bring some more life back to the motel area. As always its great speaking to people at the motel about our plans and goals and we really appreciate those who have stopped by to purchase a room!

With the events now starting to die down now Halloween is finished look out for some more events coming from us! we look forward to seeing you around the motel 🙂

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🎊 A new Milestone achieved! 🎊

Yesterday we reached a milestone at the motel which was selling our 100th room! (101 rooms now at the time I'm writing this)  As always we want to say thank you to the people that stop by the motel to chat with us or to purchase a room 😄 even if its just giving people the odd room tour I'm glad people are enjoying what we are doing. While these past few weeks have been pretty slow we are still around and working on some new stuff, you may have noticed some of our new advertisements just so we have a little variety on tweedle than the same old copy paste promotion.

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These past few weeks I've been working on making our bookings page we have setup through our room keys a bit more easier to look at and understand for customers as well as fixing some mistakes in formatting and spelling that slipped under the radar. Now when you visit our page you can see exactly how many days you have left on your tenancy and this is automatically updated on a daily basis. (very snazzy right?)

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We're looking into some fun events for Christmas depending on the planning we can get done  so here's hoping you see and enjoy some of the events that might pop up from us this Christmas 🙂 As always thanks for reading and checking up on how the motel is doing if we haven't already we look forward to meeting you around the city or at the motel! ​

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Hope you all have a wonderful holiday thanks for taking the time to read! ❤️

-Sal Marlowe and Silas Green​
 
 🎊Merry Christmas! ❤️ 

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Its been nearly a month since our last update so I thought now, just before new years would be a great time! 🙂 We are still going strong at the motel, for any of you that have stopped by recently you may have noticed some snazzy new artwork on the wall, While its not something that contributes towards what were pushing for business wise we are very happy having this at the motel just to give a little nod to all the great people we have together working towards businesses like this one.​

This month we had the pleasure of giving a Chamber Of Commerce member a tour of our motel and answering a number of questions regarding our business so here's hoping they liked what they saw! we have seen a small increase in room sales as well this past month (maybe its the Christmas spirit or maybe its people not wanting to freeze to death with all the snow in the city haha) which is always great to see and were as always glad people are enjoying the services we offer 😄

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As always thank you to everyone who stops by the motel whether its for a room or a chat or even some interesting business proposals and partnerships. I hope you all have had a wonderful Christmas and have a great new years, we look forward to spending more time with all of you next year ❤️ ​

- Sal, Silas and Aaron

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It would be criminal if you guys didn't get the business after all this work, nice meeting you guys again today! Cheers for the room 🙂
100% agree. This is a fun change from different businesses. Love the idea and even though it's unorthodox and you'd have to discuss with staff how/what, it's gonna be a sick concept when you get the business official.

Impressive that you've been at it for all this time!

 
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