Kaostic
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- London, UK
//I thought it might be cool to get some RP-style writing on the forums, so what better way to do it than as a collaborative effort. Here's the rules:
//1. You must continue where the last post left off.
//2. When ending a post, you must start the next paragraph.
//3. You may make commentary on the previous post, but this can only be done using // and in green text. You must not use this to influence other writers in where the story should go.
//4. Be creative.
//5. Don't be that guy (or girl) that ruins it for everyone by ending the story (i.e. and then he died. And then he woke up and it was all a dream etc.).
//6. Keep an eye on the "X has replied to this thread" notification. It could mess up the story if two people reply with differing timelines.
Fresh faced and a little nauseous from his recent journey across the unforgiving ocean, he looks around, shielding his eyes his hand arm as the baking Greek sun beats down. His old life left behind, he's ready to start a fresh on the island of Altis.
He walks slowly along the pier, trying desperately to balance himself as another wave of nausea washes over him. Small beads of cold sweat begin to seep from his pours as the scenery in front of him begins to toss and turn. His vision begins to turn black around the edges and he can feel himself swaying. Before he knows it, he's looking up at the sky, clouds laid out before him and, just before he gives in to the darkness, he sees a shadowed figure cover the sky. He tries to get words out, but it's too late - his eyes close and he's gone.
He wakes up...
//1. You must continue where the last post left off.
//2. When ending a post, you must start the next paragraph.
//3. You may make commentary on the previous post, but this can only be done using // and in green text. You must not use this to influence other writers in where the story should go.
//4. Be creative.
//5. Don't be that guy (or girl) that ruins it for everyone by ending the story (i.e. and then he died. And then he woke up and it was all a dream etc.).
//6. Keep an eye on the "X has replied to this thread" notification. It could mess up the story if two people reply with differing timelines.
Fresh faced and a little nauseous from his recent journey across the unforgiving ocean, he looks around, shielding his eyes his hand arm as the baking Greek sun beats down. His old life left behind, he's ready to start a fresh on the island of Altis.
He walks slowly along the pier, trying desperately to balance himself as another wave of nausea washes over him. Small beads of cold sweat begin to seep from his pours as the scenery in front of him begins to toss and turn. His vision begins to turn black around the edges and he can feel himself swaying. Before he knows it, he's looking up at the sky, clouds laid out before him and, just before he gives in to the darkness, he sees a shadowed figure cover the sky. He tries to get words out, but it's too late - his eyes close and he's gone.
He wakes up...
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